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Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 5
Hello, I'm here for the review again! Soo the fight scene in the beginning was totally rad! I can see Ndutu turning into a quite awesome soldier. And speaking of ...
Jul 23, 2019 -
Re: Never Give Up
Well, I think this is a wonderful story, with a subtle essence of children's stories which has a moral, or a lesson for the readers. I like how Grace raises ...
Jul 23, 2019 -
Re: Who's That Cutie? (An excerpt from a comic script)
Well, I think you should totally make it in a comic strip, this is quite interesting! The beginning is really beautiful, with the melody on a rainy day, I think ...
Jul 23, 2019 -
Re: The One I Loved (4)
I was eager to know more about Adam since the last chapter, and this one satisfied all my questions about him. Honestly I thought he would be rude or unwilling ...
Jul 21, 2019 -
Re: The One I Loved (3)
Hey there, I'm here for the review again! So, this was quite an interesting chapter. Now I really wanna know what kind of person Adam is like. According to the ...
Jul 20, 2019 -
Re: Artificers Prologue: Silent Gods
Well, this was an interesting prologue. I think you did a good job creating a solid idea of what the assassin, Illas is like and I hope to see more ...
Jul 19, 2019 -
Re: The One I Loved (1)
Hey there! This was a very interesting first chapter, pulled me right in. I assume learning the truth about her father is going to be a huge turning point in ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: Reminiscence (Chapter 1)
Hello! I found this point of view really interesting. At the beginning, I thought the narrator is a young woman who lives in a forest and probably has the fawn ...
Jul 15, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 4
Hello there! I'm here for the review again. You did a great job on this! I love how every character here has a distinguished voice. I especially liked Ndutu's reaction ...
Jul 15, 2019 -
Re: A Heavenly Song
Hello! This is the first time I'll be reviewing your work. This was great. I really really loved it! I admire the way your sentences flow so smoothly. When the ...
Jul 14, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 3
Hello! This is the first time I'm reviewing your writing. I'll start by saying that I really love your descriptive writing style. It's so detailed and vivid, I could FEEL ...
Jul 13, 2019 -
Re: Those Red Eyes
Hey there! The idea was strange indeed, as most of our dreams are weird and doesn't make much sense. I liked the way the cousins acted robotic and indifferent, that ...
Jul 13, 2019 -
Re: Reminiscence (Prologue)
Hey there! I'll start by saying that it's quite intriguing and leaves the reader wanting to know more. Reading the description, at first I thought it was about an old ...
Jul 12, 2019 -
Re: Bound by Blood
Hello! First of all, I'd like to say that this was interesting. The way Amber tried her best to stop herself from killing a human says a lot about her. ...
Jul 11, 2019 -
Re: Petal by Petal
Hello there. I hope you're doing well. I'll start by saying that this was beautiful and deep. The comparison between depression and a rose losing its petals was truly unique. ...
Jul 11, 2019
