IsItLove

I thought that was written amazingly. You didn't give too much away to the reader. However, you kept the reader drawn in with you beautiful description. I gazed at the ...

WOW! I really enjoyed that, although at parts I found it hard to work out which person you were talking about so it might be an idea to put more ...

I really enjoyed this. I likeed the begining and how it progressed. Here are some nitpicks: quick and a police car to You need to add and extra 'o' to ...

Hi I think you need to add a little more than just a blurb to get people interested. You need to remove the second capital here: KIsha There shouldn't be ...

I really enjoyed that it gave a beautiful insight into your life and it also gave me an understanding. It is such a shame that you forgot your routine but ...

I think you are a brilliant writer; what you had was really interesting but, there was no story. I think you need to add a lot more detail and a ...

I really enjoyed the story; I thought it was very interesting and a great concept. I thought you decription was really good and I really liked when you decribed how ...

I liked your idea, although I think you need to have a bit more action to your story because not much really happened in your first chapter. :) We are ...

I really enjoyed the song; it's really beautiful. I love the single lines dotted about it really mixes it up. You need to move the exclamation mark onto the same ...

Sorry if this is completely wrong but...was it to with an arranged Muslim marriage? I thought that where "Father" came in, because anywhere else it may have been a little ...

I really enjoyed this. It was terribly true. Times when I want to relive that moment forever and now, I can't remember the simplest of details. Your writing is fantastic, ...

That was beautiful. Parts of it reminded me of Titanic: the romantic part, not the ship sinking, everyone dying part! I really enjoyed it, you could tell it came from ...

I really enjoyed it so far and can't wait to see where it leads, there was only a few mistakes I spotted! most people in town we’re making the most ...

I loved the story ! There isn't really any editing to be said that hasn't been already! So i'll skip that part. I really enjoyed it, but I agree with ...

I really enjoyed your story, I felt captivated by it. I agree with other users that you should diffrentiate the thoughts with italics. I also think that it is confusing ...