Irislillygray

Thanks so much for the tag! I'll make sure to read chapter 4!

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Thank you for your review, you are so right, I did not think about the suddenness of the attack, thank you. I am glad you like Eva, I love her ...

Thank you for your insight. I agree that Chapter 3 comes out of nowhere, I will have to rethink his introduction, the shadow beast are suppose to come out of ...

Thank you I need all the help I can get! I understand your thoughts on Robin and the servant girl, thank you for pointing it out. I will have to ...

Thank you so much! I am so glad you think my story is awesome! Your corrections have helped me! Thanks again! ~Iris Rose

Wow, thanks for all the help. I hope you will be willing to review my future chapters. I will try hard to apply your advice to my writing. Thanks for ...

Ok! Thanks for the support!

I have posted the next chapter.

I have posted the next chapter.

Thank you so much for your corrections! I will be sure to try and use your advice in my work! I really do appreciate your help!

Thank for telling me and yes it is supposed to be awkward. Thank you for the comment! I hope you will like the next chapter when it come out!

Ok, will do! Thank you for the support!

Good start to your story! I liked it! Here are a few tips I have. I hope they help you! This sentence is a little choppy, "He climbed off his ...

Your welcome! I am glad I could help! I am very excited to read the next chapter!