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Re: Dungeon
I liked it pretty well, I think that first I will start with the negative stuff, the biggest problem was that some letters were capitalized and some were not, if ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Wilting Plant in a Black Glass Case
Hello! my name is MagicAce and I am new to this site and don't REALLY no how to review so pleas tell me if I did it wrong. Okay so ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: The Ones Who Dream
wow, that was great! I think you did an amazing job! I loved your begging, normally the thing I look for most in poems or story's is the beginning and ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: the first time i felt my mouth go numb.
wow, I think you did pretty awesome! hi their this is MagicAce and I am here to review your work! so first I would like to say I really liked ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: A Hurt Grandaughter's Reality
Hi! my name is MagicAce and I am new to this site and this is one of my first reviews so I hope you can find it helpful. So I ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Immortal Warrior
WOW! that was really good! you did an awesome job! now this is only my second or third review so pleas tell me if I did something wrong. Okay first ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: Faceless one
WOW, that was awesome! I mean really I was never MUCH for poems, but that,that was amazing, I felt like I was a part of the poem like I could ...
Feb 20, 2017 -
Re: The Changer
Okay so good job I will go on with the negative stuff first then the good stuff, well as for the grammatical mistakes, the last review covered that but my ...
Feb 20, 2017