Inspiredravens

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I've come to review! So first I would like to say that I love this poem in the way it sounds. Its really nice, but I ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* I have come to review! I always like to start off by shredding the first paragraph since it is a very important part of the story. ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I have come to review :) So ill guess I will start with what I first noticed and then go into feels and stuff.. So here ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I’ve come to review! Okay, so to start, I’m just going to jump right in to quotes. I’ll get around to feels and plots after. Not ...

Hey there! *trumpets sounding* So I have come to review again :) First I would like to say that I have a wonderful friend who helped me figure out how ...

Hey there *trumpets sounding* I’ve come to review! So, this first part is going to seem a bit nit picky, sorry not sorry, but I like to get it out ...

“He’d also tested my healing factor in ways I only thought existed in nightmares.” Where the “only” is placed in this sentence makes it so that Fin ONLY thought about ...

Hi there, here for another review:) So there really wasn't much that I found. I have differing views on the switch of characters, but I think you made it work ...

A review to help you along... Okay, so for starters, let me apologize in advance for how long this review is and for why: me being nitpicky. However, it is ...

LOVED THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, it's time for another review :) Okay, so: “What do you want, Ash?” Usually a person does not refer to another who they hate who has ...

Wow. THIS deserves the feature you got. Even in the short and simple words, many can relate. There is nothing to change, twist, tweek- nothing. It is perfect. Don't ever ...

LOVED THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER. Absolutely amazing, but there are a few things to think about/fix. For starters: 'I was about to console him, give him my best wishes, ...

Really good and neat and short, my only suggestions would be that the word "the" is in front of the following line, not in the back of "rising and falling." ...

"Better to just accept it and move on, as they say.” He can't exactly go anywhere yet, so moving on isnt an option for him. "I briefly wondered if my ...

Hey there, here's another review for this wonderful work! "I hacked and flailed as my lungs tried to remember their main functions and my tender eyes screamed. I cringed at ...