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Re: Bad Habit.
I deeply enjoyed this. The sinister plan of the presumably evil parents of hers, the consequence of the jail with a very large lock to describe the magnitude of the ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: Bout of Numb
The flow of the poem is a little jagged, but overall, it is a nice poem. It has an emotional feel to it although it seems in the end she ...
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: Your eyes...
I put tremendous thought into this and here is my opinion. What I got from this was pure affection and loyalty. I also think this has a compassionate appeal to ...
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: do not go softly
I love this poem. It touched me in a way i can't express with words, only with my tears. I literally read this over and over again. I dare not ...
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: Navigating a Sea of Disjointed Thoughts
I like this it is very imaginative and thought provoking .
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: Deleted
This gives me a bone chilling thought of pain and empathy. This also has a Stephen King affect on me which is a good thing regarding my love for his ...
Sep 4, 2012 -
Re: Veins
I enjoyed this. It's full of....mysterious loneliness if that makes sense. Somehow, I generate some feelings of darkness and fear by just reading this. There's something hidden deep within this ...
Sep 3, 2012 -
Re: Mute Emotions
Overall, I loved the song. The lyrics are mixed with feelings of shyness, anxiety, insecurity, fear and inferiority. That's what I see in it. Also, I believe that the man ...
Sep 3, 2012
