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Oh, thanks so much for the lovely comments! They're very encouraging to read :)

This is a really cool poem :) I'm proud of myself- I guessed what it was abut halfway through. Still, it does make you think about what water can do ...

Thanks a lot :) I take on borad what you've said/ However, I don't think the quote marks necessarily indicate sarcasm, just that those words are being spoken. Do ya ...

That's interesting :)

Oh, thanks so much for the review! Your comments mean a lot, I'm so glad you liked it.

thanks :) I did enjoy it, it was a great poem.

Thanks for the review :) I understand what you mean about extending it to the hanging, and I agree that that would make for a more climactic ending!

No, it's fine, don't worry! But sleep would probably be a good idea :)

Tahnks for the review :) I will take what you say into account! However, I'd like to point out that this IS a rhyming poem... the last word of every ...

Thanks a lot :) Yeah, I can see that "Battled" is wrongly capitalized... oops!

Thank you so much! This is actually the first thing I've ever posted on here, so it's lovely to have such nice comments about it! I completely understand what you ...