Inked

Thank you for taking the time to read it. I'm not sure if I'm a good writer, but I know what I feel, and this was it. It means a ...

Thank you, I am currently rewriting, and it is a short story, I just need to find an ending. I agree that some sentences are awkward, I will make changes. ...

Thank you, that was helpful!

Thank you, honestly I'm not a fan of this problem either, but It was one of those stories that just WANTED to be written. Thank you for your review I ...

It is sweet. Usually you hear poetry that condemns life to being a jerk, but you make it seem sweet and likeable. It was a cute poem, that I really ...

I have never in my life read a poem like this. It is so perfect! I love it. The concept. The everything! I think you could add more stanzas, maybe ...

Umm Kay... Thanks.

Thank you, I felt the same way. I knew I would rewrite it and if you look up you can see that I did, thank you for you review! It ...

Okay I changed it, sinc. My last two reviews!

Oops sorry :) it's just really apparent... Good luck!

Thank you I appreciate your review it helps a lot. I hope you will se. More of me, because I'm excited to keep on writing! ~Inked

Inked here! I'm not sure if you are trying to convince yourself here. It is beautiful nonetheless. I can feel the Hope. It is a really nice piece. I love ...

Inked here! All I have to say is WOW! That was good. I can feel how you poured your emotions into this, yet is a story all our own because ...

No problem, if you extend your poem I'd love to read it. :)

Just read over it. Then click on edit on the right side. :)