InfiniteSnowfall

Hey DrStrangeLove! This piece was really interesting, yet freaking scary to read. I had to resist the urge to look behind me to make sure no one was there to ...

Wow. So first off, hi Cailey! As I was saying - wow. This is so amazing! I love the description and vivid imagery used in this short story. I felt ...

Hey Giselle! I really like this prologue! I love your description. It's just so... Amazing. You picked very good words to paint the picture in the reader's mind. You caught ...

Oh my gosh. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This turned out to be a lot more intense than I thought it would be. Thank you for that, ...

Hey there! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy the site. There are a ton of amazing people here, who all share their love for writing. Now, ...

This won't be much of a review, because I agree with what Alpha and Jcsmooth already mentioned. So, I'm not going to mention most of that stuff again. While I ...

Hi, Snow here to review your work! First off, you put this in the novel category, so is this a prologue or chapter one? Just curious. So, to be honest, ...

Hey there! I love reading diary entries as stories. I don't know why, but I find them so interesting. Maybe it's the thought that you're not really supposed to be ...

Hi Abbie! I feel really bad for this girl. She has absolutely no confidence in herself. I'm curious how she changed so drastically within a year. I guess I'll have ...

This escalated really quickly. I liked all how Avril's first instincts were to save Naomi. I was surprised at how much she knew about the whole situation. I don't know ...

Hi again! Sorry this review is a little late. After reading the chapter, I had to go do something. Now I'm back. I liked this chapter, even if it was ...

Hi runawaylove! I really love your username, the title of the poem, and the poem itself! I admit, I am not a poet myself. That's only because I don't understand ...

Hi Ionut! Let me start off by saying I really liked this story. I liked how the narrator/writer interacted with Carl, just like TwinkleStar said. That was a very creative ...

Hi Deanie! I just finished reading your first chapter and I am super interested and excited to find out what happens next. I really like Avril's opinions on books. I ...

I completely agree with thewriterinside. She put it a lot clearer than I would. I would probably ramble about how amaze-balls this is and not make a lick of sense. ...