InfiniteSnowfall

Hi LittleFox. Such a cute username. ^^ Let's get straight to the review first. Half- abandoned, rotting. ~ Half-abandoned. There doesn't need to be a space at all between the ...

Hi there! I found it funny that bout a week or so before review day, you post a short story about a girl being consumed by darkness. By blackness. The ...

Hi KittyCatMeow! I sense you have a thing for cats. Maybe just a little bit? Haha anyway, I read the description of this piece and decided I had to read ...

Hey wholesomereader! So right off the bat, you begin the story using the word 'You're'. That caught my interest immediately. A second person point of view? That's super cool! Not ...

Hey Sammygriff! A member of Green Lantern here to review your work! Let's get to it. As Iggy already stated, this doesn't look very much like a poem. Most poems ...

Hey Sushi! By the way, love the green sushi avatar. Go Green Lanterns! Anyway, I really like where you GriffinClaws' story is going. It is really captivating and leaves me ...

This is a really good idea. I think including this type of thing for stories like yours is very beneficial. Now with having this up, the story will be a ...

Hey there! This is a really good first chapter. It wasn't boring at all, even if most of the chapter was information. The pacing is really nice. Also, I like ...

Hey Djinn! I really enjoyed reading this essay. I love Japanese culture, so this was really interesting to me. Learned something new today! Good job on this essay! I want ...

Hi Valkyrie! I am a huge chicken. No denying that. All my friends and family know it. So, here I am, reading this at midnight, in my room. Yeah... Probably ...

I kind of see the resemblance of this story and Percy Jackson, but then again, I don't. Just because they both have action and a protagonist that seems to attract ...

Hey again. :) Another incredible chapter. I like how Desmond is very care-free. He does what he wants, when he wants. No matter what other people think or how exactly ...

Hi Wildwildcat! I'm going to start off by saying that I really like your title. It's really simple and straight to the point. It's also an interesting one. My first ...

Hi Lozzinator! The first thing that caught my attention was the title. It's really interesting to me. I'm looking forward to finding out how the title ties in with the ...

Hi Pencil2Paper! Here to review your lovely poem! So first off, I love the title of this poem. It really caught my eye and once I started reading the poem, ...