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Re: Laser Cat
Hi PebbleToad! I really liked your story! I really loved your description and your word choice (besides the vocab by the way haha). I have a few suggestions I wanna ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Whomerlock: A Fanfiction
Oh, my goodness, jazzydracula. I love this already. I'm not a huge fan of Sherlock, but I thought eh, why not? Sherlock can be fun, depending on how it's written, ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Bedtime
Hi Purple! I really like your poem. I love the theme of it, and I love the words you chose to describe everything. I thought your words flowed really nicely. ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: End the "R-Word!"
Hey there! This was such a good read. I never realized how hurtful and offensive the R-Word could be. I knew it was a mean thing to call someone, but ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 6:
Hey! I finally got to read it, and I'm glad I did. I loved this chapter! I really liked how Isugoro reacted towards everything happening and how Maggie did also. ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: Confusion Tricks The Mind
Hi SecreteJournalist! This is a very interesting story you have here. I really like how you wrote this out. We, the reader,s find out what's happening exactly at the moment ...
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: Life of Dustin Chapter 1: Getting To Now Dustin
Hi Sammy! Just a few quick thought... So, the chapter is in a whole block of text. Instead of doing that, make paragraphs. Also, each line of dialogue should be ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Inhumanoids Bk. 1: The First Dark Rebel
Hi Cecilia, and welcome to YWS! If you have any questions on the site, feel free to ask me or stop by here: Anyway, you have a really nice start ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: For Only The True
Hiya rbt! Happy Review Day! I love your poem. I agree with the two reviews below me... It's so simple, but so perfect. I also agree with FatCowSis about the ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Semper Fi
Hi CelerityFire21! You have a really nice poem here! My dad is in the Marine Corps, so I understand the little saying you through in there, such as 'do or ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Who needs nine lives?
Hi Deanie~! :) My first review day review and I got to read your story! Isn't that awesome? Haha. Anyway, I liked it! I like the idea, characters, description, and ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Moths and Butterflies
MysteryMe! You're just an amazing writer. I adore your short stories. I really liked how it was written in letter form. I also love your description and pretty much everything. ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: I thought
Oh my goodness, GriffinClaw! I'm back again to review your amazing poetry. You're such a good poet, I'm jealous. Your words flow nicely, I understand what the poem is trying ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words
Hey, hey, hey... Again! So, yay! I just skimmed through this chapter real quick and saw a few great things already! First thing I noticed is you decided to write ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet
Hey again! I really do like this story. Too bad it's so short! I wish it was twice (maybe thrice) times longer than it is right now. And I see ...
Sep 29, 2013