InfiniteSnowfall

Hi PebbleToad! I really liked your story! I really loved your description and your word choice (besides the vocab by the way haha). I have a few suggestions I wanna ...

Oh, my goodness, jazzydracula. I love this already. I'm not a huge fan of Sherlock, but I thought eh, why not? Sherlock can be fun, depending on how it's written, ...

Hi Purple! I really like your poem. I love the theme of it, and I love the words you chose to describe everything. I thought your words flowed really nicely. ...

Hey there! This was such a good read. I never realized how hurtful and offensive the R-Word could be. I knew it was a mean thing to call someone, but ...

Hey! I finally got to read it, and I'm glad I did. I loved this chapter! I really liked how Isugoro reacted towards everything happening and how Maggie did also. ...

Hi SecreteJournalist! This is a very interesting story you have here. I really like how you wrote this out. We, the reader,s find out what's happening exactly at the moment ...

Hi Sammy! Just a few quick thought... So, the chapter is in a whole block of text. Instead of doing that, make paragraphs. Also, each line of dialogue should be ...

Hi Cecilia, and welcome to YWS! If you have any questions on the site, feel free to ask me or stop by here: Anyway, you have a really nice start ...

Hiya rbt! Happy Review Day! I love your poem. I agree with the two reviews below me... It's so simple, but so perfect. I also agree with FatCowSis about the ...

Hi CelerityFire21! You have a really nice poem here! My dad is in the Marine Corps, so I understand the little saying you through in there, such as 'do or ...

Hi Deanie~! :) My first review day review and I got to read your story! Isn't that awesome? Haha. Anyway, I liked it! I like the idea, characters, description, and ...

MysteryMe! You're just an amazing writer. I adore your short stories. I really liked how it was written in letter form. I also love your description and pretty much everything. ...

Oh my goodness, GriffinClaw! I'm back again to review your amazing poetry. You're such a good poet, I'm jealous. Your words flow nicely, I understand what the poem is trying ...

Hey, hey, hey... Again! So, yay! I just skimmed through this chapter real quick and saw a few great things already! First thing I noticed is you decided to write ...

Hey again! I really do like this story. Too bad it's so short! I wish it was twice (maybe thrice) times longer than it is right now. And I see ...