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IndianAtHeart

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Mummy

    Wow, very intriguing and though provoking. The first paragraph was a bit puxxling, i head to read a couple sentences over a couple of times to get the jist of ...

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Our own Neverland

    I am really liking where this story is going. It kept my attention the whole time I was reading which is always an important thing and you only had a ...

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Lure Him to Wonderland

    I am really liking where this story is going. It kept my attention the whole time I was reading which is always an important thing and you only had a ...

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Script » Theatre, Teen Fiction Re: Another Short Film Script

    Hey hello! How's it going for you? I'm Ind and I'm here with a review for you. I like the concept here. It's not cliché but not that uncommon too. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: It Was Said Casually!

    Dec 30, 2015


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee