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Hi Em101cats, This is a great piece of poetry. I love how you create the tension between water and air. How water is calming and welcomes you, and air is ...

Hello SereneSimpliciT, This is a very touching story. It's beautifully written and I hope you got a good grade for it in your class. You make the narrator seem like ...

Hi Caylleen, This is a great poem! I love the message of only be yourself it's who you're meant to be. I feel the reason kids want to become other ...

Hi crazecl1p, Welcome to YWS hope you enjoy your stay. I can't say I personally liked this piece but in general it was masterfully written. You captured the "no care" ...

Hello BirthdayHangman, Iv'e never tried this, reviewing a review, huh. Personally I have never read the book Lolita nor have I heard of it. It definitely sounds interesting, not something ...

Hello WeasleyDragonStar, So far I've only read this chapter but from what I can tell this is a great story. You don't leave out any detail. My favorite part of ...

Hi Dragonfphoenix, Thanks for this list I'll probably use a bunch of these in the future. I had fun creating a character for my story I'm writing. It came out ...

Hi PhoenixGray, This is a good story, but there are some major thing that need to be changed that are just general writing rules. First of all, make sure to ...

Dear Nightcrawler, This has to be one of the best things I've ever read on this website. I hope everyone has the chance to read this amazing piece of literature. ...

Hi Morrigan, This is a great poem. I can slightly relate to the garden aspect of this because my mom loves to garden. But one summer she broke her ankle ...

Hi Shreyash, This is a good poem. I especially like the topic and how you move through the ages with what we thought would be the best thing. However many ...

Hey Falconer, I love this poem. It all talks about light, such a simple concept. But each stanza seems to bring out a different emotion even thought it's all just ...

Hi fortis, This is a great poem. I love your word choice all throughout the poem. There are only two things I would change. First of all, at the end ...

Hi EternalRain, This is a great story, a nice twist on the original fairy tale. Content wise it is nicely laid out and seems complete. I also like the last ...

Hello NicolMemo, This is an interesting poem, this persons life is definitely messed up. There are a few grammar thing that I noticed: "I was regretting because I turned back; ...