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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Competence.

    Hey there! I feel like reviewing your poem. One thing first though, I have had no lessons in poetry and have only written it once before. My comments might not ...

    May 14, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Desert Hill

    Hey there Conrad! I am going to look at your story. ;) Let's begin! I. Nit-Picking The hill was very high. Johnny pushed down on the pedals as hard as ...

    May 13, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Anger

    Hey there! Here is my promised review. It seems Blink covered a lot, but still I will try my best! ;) Please ignore me if I repeat somethings that he ...

    May 13, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Terrible Secret

    Hey there! I am Incognito, and I believe I wish to take a peak at your story. ;) Let's begin. Nit-Picking No one is there to help me. I believe ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Coldwalker [I}

    Hey Conrad! I decided I would take a look at your writig, because I believe I have never done such a thing before. xD Let us begin! I. Nit-Picks as ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You

    Hey there! I am Incognito, and I believe I am going to take a gander at your story. Sorry if I repeat anything others may have said, but I don't ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Crack Fantasy

    Kyllorac, this made me howl! That was so random, it hurt my brain! Oh wow. That is very epic. I give your props for that. There is a couple things ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Love's Devil Moon Ch. One

    Hey there! I believe your story has caught my interest so I am going to take a gander at it. ;) Let us begin! I. Nit-Picking "I'm so bored" There ...

    May 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Work-in-Progress: Part One

    Hey there! I shall take a gander at your work today! ;) Don't worry, I don't bite [s]hard[/s]. I. Nit-Picking in terror. Tears were The period should be a comma. ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Disabilities

    Hello there! Here is your promised review! Sorry it has teaken me so long, I have been busy. Sorry if I repeat anything the other reviwers have said. I don't ...

    May 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Revenge

    Hello there! I am just going to take a quick gander at this story. I am interested. ;) I. Nit-Picking Annie Arballo stood knee deep in the tossing waves, not ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: ~Endlessly Falling~

    Hello there, my dearest sister. I just happened to stumble upon this. You never even told me anything about posting a story lately! I must review it then. And I ...

    Apr 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Its secret must be kept

    Hello there! ;) I think I will take a little gander at your story. I. Nit-Picking The silent breeze passed him by, shaking nothing, for there were no leaves in ...

    Apr 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fragments

    Hello there. I think I am going to take a gander at this. ;) I. NIT-PICKING her blonde hair glowing softly First things first. Is glowing actually it because she ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: t7u

    Hello there. I believe I may take a little gander at your story. ;) I'll get started then. I. NIT-PICKING The heat was stifling and a solitary trickle of perspiration ...

    Apr 22, 2009


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind