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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue

    Hey Smiley! I am Incognito, and I am going to review you work today. Shall we begin? Because your piece is a short prologue, I won't go through my whole ...

    Sep 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Is he real?

    This is definitely and interesting piece for sure. There was no really issues with punctuation grammar, yet there was a couple mess ups that don't really matter. They are easy ...

    Sep 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sinner's search chapter one [1]

    Hello sunnygirl 40! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today! Shall we begin? I. Nit-Picking I always knew I was different. No one understands me. ...

    Sep 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Lost Hope [1]

    Hey Jiggs! Because your writing is just pure awesomness and I am lazy on my own part, I am not going to organize my review in any particular way. ;) ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Love the sinner

    Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. I am actually looking forward to this. I have never read a story about a pedo ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Seven Souls (Temp. Title)

    Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. Because your piece is so small, I won't actually review it in parts like I usually ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: And When They Get To Heaven: D-Day

    Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. It intrigued me that it was on D-Day, or known as Operation Overlord. xD I always ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Thorn's Rose Prologue

    Hey there ThornedRose! I decided today, because I have never read or reviewed any of your works, that I might as well do so, and after all it is in ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Death

    Hey there! I am Incognito, and I am going to go through your story with you. Let us begin!~ I always thought about how I was to die. First off, ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: First Glimpse

    Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today!~ First things first though is that you are fairly new here and I don't think you ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Drowning

    Hey there! I am Incognito and I am here to review your short story today. Don't mind me. Let us begin!~ I. Nit-Picking The water rushed against my skin, ripples ...

    Jul 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feelings.

    Hello there! I am Incognito, and I am going to review your work today! Just a fore warning, I have no qualifications for poetry, meaning I can only tell you ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Day vs. Night

    Hey there! I am here to review your poem as requested. Just to let you know in advance but I have no experience with poetry and have taken no lessons ...

    Jun 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Prayer

    Hello there! I am Incognito and here is your review as promised! ;3 Let's begin! I. Nit-Picking Amurial thought as he walked on top of dewy grass You don't really ...

    Jun 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: As the World Crumbles (ch.1)

    Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today, but before that I would like to remind you if you haven't heard ...

    Jun 8, 2009


If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn