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Re: Prologue
Hey Smiley! I am Incognito, and I am going to review you work today. Shall we begin? Because your piece is a short prologue, I won't go through my whole ...
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Re: Is he real?
This is definitely and interesting piece for sure. There was no really issues with punctuation grammar, yet there was a couple mess ups that don't really matter. They are easy ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Sinner's search chapter one [1]
Hello sunnygirl 40! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today! Shall we begin? I. Nit-Picking I always knew I was different. No one understands me. ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: Lost Hope [1]
Hey Jiggs! Because your writing is just pure awesomness and I am lazy on my own part, I am not going to organize my review in any particular way. ;) ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Love the sinner
Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. I am actually looking forward to this. I have never read a story about a pedo ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Seven Souls (Temp. Title)
Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. Because your piece is so small, I won't actually review it in parts like I usually ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: And When They Get To Heaven: D-Day
Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today. It intrigued me that it was on D-Day, or known as Operation Overlord. xD I always ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Thorn's Rose Prologue
Hey there ThornedRose! I decided today, because I have never read or reviewed any of your works, that I might as well do so, and after all it is in ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Death
Hey there! I am Incognito, and I am going to go through your story with you. Let us begin!~ I always thought about how I was to die. First off, ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: First Glimpse
Hey there! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today!~ First things first though is that you are fairly new here and I don't think you ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Drowning
Hey there! I am Incognito and I am here to review your short story today. Don't mind me. Let us begin!~ I. Nit-Picking The water rushed against my skin, ripples ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Feelings.
Hello there! I am Incognito, and I am going to review your work today! Just a fore warning, I have no qualifications for poetry, meaning I can only tell you ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Day vs. Night
Hey there! I am here to review your poem as requested. Just to let you know in advance but I have no experience with poetry and have taken no lessons ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Prayer
Hello there! I am Incognito and here is your review as promised! ;3 Let's begin! I. Nit-Picking Amurial thought as he walked on top of dewy grass You don't really ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: As the World Crumbles (ch.1)
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I am Incognito and I am going to review your work today, but before that I would like to remind you if you haven't heard ...
Jun 8, 2009
