Incandescence

Thanks for reading; I'm glad you liked it. RE: PS: Isn't he creepy?

wordy, un-interesting idea, lifelessly portrayed. tedious, boring process, review others' work.

Well, I guess it helped...

Psy, with all due respect, I owe you a critique. Well, here it is: I’m afraid I don’t find this a very successful poem. It is vague, abstract, and repetitive, ...

Get over yourself.

Of course, if more than one person does the same thing without coming into contact with the Other, then the incident loses its originality. Either way, I wasn't saying you ...

That's an opinion, and one that, regardless of whether it has any validity, has little to no relevance to the point I made. As a second counter, he wasn't imitating ...

lone liness is just a cheap imitation of e.e. cumming's l (o ne lin es s)

The piece is satirical: my Poetry Workshop professors are morons who value publications over intellectual depth and breadth.

So permeated with American thought...

Blegh. Trash it, burn it, start over.

While I whole-heartedly agree that poetry should be made accessible to everyone, I don't see how this piece falls into that criticism, or where it came from. Currently, I'm taking ...

Why do you post criticism if you utterly disregard authorial intent? As I said, I'm sorry you had the confusion you did (of all eight professors who've read this, none ...

The ellipses were to give the stanzas proper spacing. For whatever reason, Nate hasn't been able to get the posts to retain their original formatting. Blah blah blah.

Hence the reason it's seen as 'good'.