In_the_Moonlight

Sorry Kj, I don't have time to review the chapter right now because it's 10:00 at night and I have school tomorrow. I can't review everything right now, but I ...

Helen- I loved this excerpt. The story idea was different and unique, but interesting at the same time. Thanx for explaining the story in the beginning, too. I'm going to ...

Wow that was just.....the cutest thing. I like Vick I hope he turns out to be good for her. [quote]“No one will ever keep us apart.” Was this line supposed ...

Lucyy, I loved this chapter. What a great way to start off the story. Your writing has improved so much since I last read your prologue. Very well done. Right ...

Oh that was a burn.......geeze thats gotta hurt the ego. Anyway I thought the five lines you gave were fine. I'm gonna have to go with the first person that ...

OMG!CLIFF-HANGER! I totally 100% loved the ending of this chapter. My new thing is that I pick a quote or something out of the passage so here it goes.... Good, ...

Bada ba ba ba I'm lovin it. This is a great chapter that just opened a door to so many other good ones. I love your work, and since I ...

Awww. This chapter is really sad, but I think it was necessary to make the other chapters.......better. There were the popular, blonde girls. The boasting, big jocks. The glasses-wearing, thin ...

No, the screen isn't weird on my computer. I liked this chapter. I felt something was missing from it, something really important. Maybe it was to fast. I think you ...

Hey Lucyy- Okay I'm just gonna go ahead and review your work and then tell you more. [quote] I was stood in front You did this twice. I think you ...

Hey KJ I personally, liked this chapter. It was very informative, but in a more gracefull way- if that makes sense. The begining was great when you started with that ...

Hey KJ This chapter was different from your others. It was really slow and I didn't mind it at first, but towards the end it felt like you were giving ...

Wow this chapter was really intense. I just wish you would have made her say something to Keith before he well you know.........kicked the bucket.I can't wait to find out ...

I liked this poem a lot. The title somehow doesn't seem right, but it's your poem so.... On shame, for all The words whispered to The Forgotten Son. Sinners do ...

This was an okay poem. Part of it was really good while the other wasn't so good. I got confused somewhere in between, and then lost track. I also think ...