Young Writers Society

Aw, Yay! This was so adorable! I was actually humming a made up melody as I was reading and that to me just means you did an excellent job! Love, ...

Hey, Moonlight speaking :D So I really liked the theme of the lyrics which reminded me quite clearly of vampires and all that weird stuff. Anyhoo, this shouldn't really be ...

Hey Britishwannabe! Uh, I haven't written a review in a while and the other members who commented basically covered most of what I was gonna say so let me go ...

Wow um sorry for such a delayed reply to this story. I was sifting through stories and found this chapter. Now I can say that I'm dying to read the ...

Hey Sionarama, this was fairly good. It flowed smoothly in certain places and had a nice overall story. Drop a seed let it fall when it is It's would sound ...

Hi StrangeGirl, I really liked this. The syllables were all the right amount and even with something so short you managed to have it make sense. A bitter frost surrounds ...

Hey Pink, I've read your other chapters and I cannot wait for more to come. :D So into the review.... “Oh,” he apologized, mockingly. “I forgot we did things when ...

Anna, this story is very good so far. However there seems to be 50 pages!! I couldn't finish it!! Not because it's boring or anything but i have to leave ...

Wow, very nice. I especially liked this chapter. It seems like you're finally starting to blend more peronality and a pinch of drama into the story. I only wish that ...

Please more!!?? This was very good but a tad confusing. I neeeeeed to know if Hayes was ugly or handsome? For some reason it is bugging me so terribly that ...

I really liked this chapter but I wish that you'd give Rose a bit more personality. For example, when she's around Tristan I was hoping for a little connection, some ...

Hey again! I really enjoyed this chapter it was well thought out. I repeat these moving words to Cody as I drag myself into out tiny kitchen. I think the ...

Wow, this is really interesting. Unique. At first it bugged me a tad that the MC wasn't actually speaking, but when i allowed myself to really get into the whole ...

Yes, finally another chapter!! It was great to continue along with Maria, but I'll admit, it was a heck of a lot confusing. I had a vague memory of what ...

This was really interesting. I love the detail and it seems, well to me, that you put a lot of thought into getting the piece started. Really, it was good. ...