Published December 14, 2009
This is just a little story I wrote. It's set in the aftermath of the Prince of Persia storyline (PS3 Game) and I hope you like it.
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Yeah, I know it's quite long, but I'll be honest with you, that's just half of it. I wrote another one thats about fifty pages long, so I'll post that up some other time. A review would be appreciated greatly, and yes, I'll do some myself
Thanks anyways
Anna, this story is very good so far. However there seems to be 50 pages!! I couldn't finish it!! Not because it's boring or anything but i have to leave in 40 minutes for family stuff and this was unexpectedly very long.
P.S. I will try and give you a full review later on
P.P.S. I advise that ya try and do at least 2 reviews yourself missy.
**Mo**