Published February 6, 2010
I'm not quite sure what to call this, so I'll just go with a tentative "leaf". It's a haiku—it's supposed to be short.
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The single leaf hangs
A bitter frost surrounds him
He is all alone
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Hi StrangeGirl, I really liked this. The syllables were all the right amount and even with something so short you managed to have it make sense.
This has to be my favorite line because it describes him/leaf the most and really brings out the most emotion. I guess like imagery, it was good
~~Mo~~
P.S. I love seeing any haikus 'cuz to me i find it hard to describe something in 17 syllables.
A little short, don't you think? This type of poem is called a haiku.