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Re: wolf
This is beautiful. I love how symbolic and expressive these words are. This is genuinely the favorite poem ive ever read, and I love how the title is so simple ...
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Re: Disconnected-early draft
This is great! I love how expressive everything is! Although this is one of the best ones I’ve seen, there are a few things to tweak. For example, paragraphs! When ...
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Re: I CAN'T GO!
Wow this is great! I love your ability to express everything. But this is a bit tight, and seems more like a concept. But if you wrote a book with ...
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Re: Candy for a friend
This is really good so far! Loving the part about how- hmm, childish? Not in a mean way, but it really seems like someone young is thinking. You did an ...
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Re: Merry Xmas-A short Christmas story (but with ghosts)
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May 8
hi hi fellow yws member!!! I'd like to say this is beautiful.This unique holiday story beautifully captures the authentic voice of a young teenager growing up, masterfully shifting from a ... -
Re: Scarlett’s deep fears
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May 8
Wow. I honestly thought I was reading a classic, slow-burn suburban horror story, but the pivot you pull in the second half is completely bananas and honestly caught me totally ...