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Re: Collection of short poems
Hey, it is ImHero here for a quick review on, I guess all of these fantastic poems! Although often times I didn't see much of a purpose or wasn't astounded ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The Falling Sky
It is ImHero here as requested! I would like to thank you for being the second post on . Now for the review Rhythm/structure: I am glad to do a ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: Through Her Eyes (Fantasy and reality)
Okay so the first two lines you ask about the collision between the UNCERTAINTY of the inevitable approaching night here; “between the uncertainty of the approaching night,” which in a ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: Beside You
It is ImHero here, and maybe I am not the best to review such a piece as I don't listen to music all to much anymore. Although, I will give ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: What Makes Me A Writer
It is ImHero here going to write a review for you! Please if you have any comments on this critique to post them below or PM me. Okay so, I ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: The Caffeine
It is ImHero here completing the obligation of the review above me thread! But I can’t say this was not a pleasure to read. The poem obviously has an original ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: A Suicidal Girl
SO when I look at poetry often derived from pain I look at the personal experience to see if it is real. It does not seem real, it seems like ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: The Island of Nigh
Thank you for being my first review on I hope I can help you with this review! Okay! So the first time I read it trying not to be persuaded ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Questions
So I've done this for a long time and this is by-far the biggest misconception with writers and the rhyme scheme. You let the rhyme scheme take you away to ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: the solidarity of fire
Part 1 - Structure When I was first introduced to you, which was not so long ago I might add, I read a beautifully and eloquently written review about stereotypes. ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Why Can't We...?
Welcome! It is judgement day >D. Just kidding it is critique writing day! Why can't we, for just an instant; Be still, quiet and in peace? Firstly, I don't quite ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Poem
Hey! I was just browsing around and seen this! So if you don't mind I will review it to the best of my ability. Yes, I do see that it ...
Jul 2, 2013 -
Re: Dramatic Monologue (can't think of a title!)
Nit Picks “Doss, Floss, Bert”, Mum calls, “picnic time”. punctuation always goes inside the quotation so: “Doss, Floss, Bert,” Mum calls, “picnic time.” Okay to start this review; I al
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Evermore
Evermore, reminds me of The Raven; is that where you got your inspiration for this? :D So in my reviews I usually start off with structure. Erm, I'm not quite ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Worm Goblin
Hey imhero here to review ! okay so I don't quite know why everyone does this because a line break naturally breaks what you say, much like punctuation, so when ...
Jun 30, 2013
