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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Collection of short poems

    Hey, it is ImHero here for a quick review on, I guess all of these fantastic poems! Although often times I didn't see much of a purpose or wasn't astounded ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Falling Sky

    It is ImHero here as requested! I would like to thank you for being the second post on . Now for the review Rhythm/structure: I am glad to do a ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Through Her Eyes (Fantasy and reality)

    Okay so the first two lines you ask about the collision between the UNCERTAINTY of the inevitable approaching night here; “between the uncertainty of the approaching night,” which in a ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Beside You

    It is ImHero here, and maybe I am not the best to review such a piece as I don't listen to music all to much anymore. Although, I will give ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: What Makes Me A Writer

    It is ImHero here going to write a review for you! Please if you have any comments on this critique to post them below or PM me. Okay so, I ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Caffeine

    It is ImHero here completing the obligation of the review above me thread! But I can’t say this was not a pleasure to read. The poem obviously has an original ...

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: A Suicidal Girl

    SO when I look at poetry often derived from pain I look at the personal experience to see if it is real. It does not seem real, it seems like ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Island of Nigh

    Thank you for being my first review on I hope I can help you with this review! Okay! So the first time I read it trying not to be persuaded ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Questions

    So I've done this for a long time and this is by-far the biggest misconception with writers and the rhyme scheme. You let the rhyme scheme take you away to ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the solidarity of fire

    Part 1 - Structure When I was first introduced to you, which was not so long ago I might add, I read a beautifully and eloquently written review about stereotypes. ...

    Jul 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Can't We...?

    Welcome! It is judgement day >D. Just kidding it is critique writing day! Why can't we, for just an instant; Be still, quiet and in peace? Firstly, I don't quite ...

    Jul 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poem

    Hey! I was just browsing around and seen this! So if you don't mind I will review it to the best of my ability. Yes, I do see that it ...

    Jul 2, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Dramatic Monologue (can't think of a title!)

    Nit Picks “Doss, Floss, Bert”, Mum calls, “picnic time”. punctuation always goes inside the quotation so: “Doss, Floss, Bert,” Mum calls, “picnic time.” Okay to start this review; I al

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Evermore

    Evermore, reminds me of The Raven; is that where you got your inspiration for this? :D So in my reviews I usually start off with structure. Erm, I'm not quite ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: The Worm Goblin

    Hey imhero here to review ! okay so I don't quite know why everyone does this because a line break naturally breaks what you say, much like punctuation, so when ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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