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Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*
Hey Isha! :D Book here to review your story! :D Okay, at first i didn't actually understand the story, but as i read on i began too understand :) But ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Cross Your Heart (One-shot)
Hey :D me again :P First i just wanted to say....I totally think that this story is amazing! :D i loved how you describe their secret way of keeping secrets. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Alone into the Night
Hey Wicked! :D here's my review, sorry if it's short! :) I liked it, i mean it was simple and easy to understand. But i also got to agree with ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Worries About Today
hey! here's the review :D sorry if its short good article, i love how you said "no one's safe anymore", and its true, i mean it gets you thinking "is ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Definition of Love
I got to agree with wicked! it was a bit confusing,but i loved the plot! :D and the ending,it was very dramatic. there were some wrong grammar, but other than ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Waiting..
Okay! wow! that was life changing, and so true. Humans can't see the world clearly. i love the part where you wrote about the wars, its so true! people shouldn't ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Just the Three of Us
wow! that was sad, and it's so great that you can share this type of story to everyone :). it's hard when parents are divorced, and even harder when new ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter Three
Hey there! okay first, i can see what your doing here, i mean you have the plot and everything. But i feel that your rushing into it, it's too fast. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [1]
I totally loved it! it is a really amazing story!. But even thought it's a cliche story, you made it seem not cliche. There are some words that are kinda ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: raindrops at dawn
Wow! I absolutely love it!! and you know the sad part is? that it's true, there are some girls out there who are like that. i love the girl character! ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Peanut Butter
Hey!, first of all, i love your story! it was short, it was funny , and it was amazing! Your characters are great, and the plot was simply sweet (: ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Devil: Chapter 2
Hey,first of all i loved your novel,even though i;m not a big fan of action novels,but i really liked this one! :D i really loved how much you put in ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
Hey, NOTSO ;) I'm going to review your story today :D okay first! i loved it i mean like really loved it! it was simple and understanding! :D but i ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
Jas :D i think it is kinda cool ! :) i mean ,it's kinda different and it's something that a teenage-girl would feel if they're bestfriend date they're Ex. And ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey! :D okay,first,i totally love this story! it maybe a little cliche,but it's real. I love the part where ,Ethan see's that Lee is having a great time with another ...
Sep 20, 2010
