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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 10 ♦

    I haven't read the previous chapters so please forgive me. But this was a good read! Everything is described vividly and I love how you write the characters conflicts about ...

    Jul 5, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Of Victory and Death - Chapter 1: The Visitation

    First off, you have a very beautiful way of writing things! I like how you describe movements, especially in the first few scenes with Elysia's mother visiting her. It is ...

    Jul 5, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A blue sky

    This short story was beautiful to read. I like how it reads of a sort of old-timey story you might find hung up somewhere random on a pin board. It's ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: I Swear I’m Straight! (PrideMonth Poem)

    This was a beautiful poem, I love it so much. "No, don't take me out of the closet, I wanna stay in here! You might be fine with it, but ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Argument. Chapter 2 of The Apothecaries

    Hello there! Time to read. :) This has a very strong start. It introduces the tone and setting of story extremely well! The characters also have a lot of personality. ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Lady Alberta and the Wedding Saboteur (Part 4)

    Hello!! Time to get on with the review. :) You have a wonderful way of describing things. And a good way of writing at that. You manage to make everything ...

    Jun 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Alanna’s origin

    Hello again!!! First off, I love the names of the characters. They are very pretty and very flowing with the story. The flashback is done well. It is short, but ...

    Jun 27, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flightless: Chapter 5

    Hello! This looks like a wonderful story, so I'll get into it quickly. And apologies right off the bat because I, in fact, have not read the first four chapters. ...

    Jun 27, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Thread Still Lingers… (Proof of Concept)

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    This is a very funky story. In a good way, obviously. Second person perspective is an extremely unique take on writing and something I aDORE! You do it quite well ...

    Jun 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Passing Glance

    VERY good story. Extremely descriptive and I love that a whole lot. I enjoy the longing in the text, and how you are able to describe everything. It has a ...

    Mar 9, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Undoing of Cornelius Bottle

    hallo person!!! I really like the whimsical aspects to this a lot. I also really enjoy the whole dragon aspect of it, I'm a sucker for it. The way you ...

    Mar 9, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Nelson’s story-Ghost House

    Ooo!! As a lover of stories, and especially horror stories, from the 1800s, this was a joy to read. I like how descriptive it is and teeters on the perfect ...

    Mar 9, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: Steve Keeps Finding Stuff For Some Reason

    This is an absolutely insanely wacky story and I am all here for it. The fact that it just starts off with the title (obviously) of Steve finding stuff- but ...

    Mar 6, 2024
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Rise of The Morning Sun

    This is such a beautiful piece of work, oh mein gott. I absolutely love the stars and the planets and space in general, so this was a joy to read! ...

    Mar 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Neither Pomegranate Seed Nor Serpents Tongue: An Everbound ( My W.I.P ) Poem.

    just saw this and i think its really good! Its nice, sweet, short, and simple. The poem is really good at conveying such a simple idea in a very short ...

    Mar 6, 2024


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