IgnisandGlacialis

Hey, Iceprincess! I liked this a lot. I can see quite explicitly that you have a lot of potential, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your writing style. I really can't ...

Hey, Azula! This was a really great piece of poetry. I can't really find anything to criticise, so you're doing very well. :P You just joined today, right? Welcome to ...

THAT IS SO CUTE ... and so true. )= sad face. I really love this poem, and I can't think of anything that could improve it. Now I feel really ...

This was so sad!!! It contained so much emotion I was blown away. I can't criticise anything. I really enjoyed this piece of work: it wasn't boring, it drew me ...

Hey, DemiGodsRule! This looks like it's going to be great. First off, there are quite a few grammar mistakes I'd like to point out. The number preceding 1 - '"MIKHAIL!!!!" ...

Hey! Imaginemymind really nitpicked the only mistakes and improvable aspects I could find, so I have only compliments to offer. Well done! This was a really unique and touching poem, ...

Hey, I really liked this! It was unique, and I LOVE the ending. Ha ha :P. Really goes well with the title. I don't really have any criticism to make: ...

Hey, this was good! I have one small issue ... In the third verse, is the word 'wombded' supposed to be 'wounded'? Just asking :P P.S - Yes, I do ...

IT'S AWESOME!!! I loved the imagery, the descriptive language and the emotion. There is absolutely nothing to criticise, and I suppose my only regret is that I can't do anything ...

I agree with you other reviewers!!! This was a fantastic piece of literature and I LOVED IT. Your use of vocabulary, knitted together to form flowing phrases that were amazingly ...

That was ... interesting. I liked it, but it was a bit confusing. Okay, the mistakes I found have all been pointed out, so I will spare you the pain ...

Wow, that is really chilling. I very much enjoyed this. It was very well-written, and your spelling and grammar are both excellent. A very good prelude. It draws me in ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just wanted to say, Harry Potter is my LIFE (see signature) and although I am generally indignant about fanfiction HP stories, this one made me laugh. I c

I LOVED IT!!! This is a really beautiful short story, really philosophical and matter-of-fact. I did not get bored: I wanted to read until the end. The theme behind it ...

Hey, I liked this! It was very good, and my preceding reviewers picked out the only mistakes I could find. Some of it was beyond me :P but still, well ...