IdaPhillips

Hey there :), I really like the idea you have here; I just have a few suggestions. On of the first things i noticed about your piece was the sort ...

Hey there :), I have to say this piece wasn't at all what I was expecting when I clicked on it, and that's not a bad thing! It's good to ...

Hey there :), This is an interesting piece, I liked the little details you added to make the characters unique. That being said, the story probably could stand to have ...

Hey there :), I think I understand what you'e doing with this piece. It's raw and emotional and it does a good job of addressing common feelings people experience, though ...