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Hello Leah! Well, to begin with, I thought you're fantasy story made a nice work on drawing a pretty intellectual and touchy plot. I'm a big fan of the medieval ...

Hello Lion! Now, to begin with, we all are here, with our raw, yet, to-be-stupendous writing skills. Our writings are at their 'baby' stages and need care, warmth but also ...

Hello Adriana, My overall impression on your 'narrative poem' was that I didn't find it all that 'narrative'. I didn't get the story behind it. It was just like an ...

Hello Saccharin, I'll tell you why I liked it so much -because it's short and it has a bigger meaning. I'm the kind of girl who likes poems like these ...

L-O-V-E-D this piece! Sorry to say though, it was just too long for my capasity. I read like not even half but I liked it! Next time, make it a ...

Hello CardDragon! This lyric you wrote speaks alot about, us, people who are about to move onto college and leave all memorable things behind. I have two questions though: When ...

Hello Deanie, The poem you wrote was concise, yet full of meaning! It touches the heart and shines in the eyes. It's profuse energy and connotations really captured my heart, ...

Hello lakshmi! Let me just give you my overall impression before going into details...let's start with the up, shall we? Now, for starters, I'd say the method you used to ...

Ellow! Mello! I just loved this piece of article! It inspired me to write that 'The Nobody I'm Proud of Being' which is well...about 'me' the way this article (even ...

Amazing! Simply Amazing piece of literature! I loved the way you described the surrounding, the side-thoughts and the overall dramatism of the story. It was short, yet, showed the whole ...

Let me tell you, as starters, I LOVE 'love' tradegies! I'm a DIE-HARD Fan of them! I just Love the feeling of tearing, falling and burning inside (exaggeration :P ) ...

I totally adored this piece of writing. The last bit where the diturbacnce in tranquility takes place and the boy falls off the chair was HILLARIOUS! (or so I thought ...

Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant! I very much adored this piece of writing of yours. It had meaning, feeling and visuals all wrapped up in a beautiful piece of writing. The use ...