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Hey there! This poem was really awesome, and the butterfly shape adds so much to it. My little sister is also a social butterfly, and you really captured the "how ...

Hey there! Alpacas comin' at you with a review! First things first, welcome to YWS! I joined recently as well, and I can't wait to see what you do in ...

This was amazing! I love how you don't explain that Selene was the goddess of the moon. It really adds to the emotional atmosphere. I noticed Gravitem said that there ...

This was pretty great! I only have a few critiques to make here. - "...and do there work." 'There' should be 'their'. You might of just missed this in proofreading, ...

I just wanted to say that I love this series. You're a super talented artist, and I do the exact same thing where I forget that I drew something XD. ...

Hey there! Icon here to give you a review! This was really interesting. I loved the creepy atmosphere you built up, and I'M VERY curious about what that thing was. ...

Oh my goodness! I can't believe this slipped under my radar. I really enjoyed this chapter! I liked how you focused on both sides, and this was a great way ...

This was super awesome! :smt003 I love how this reads like a children's book, with an air of sarcasm to it. I'd normally critique the story speaking directly to the ...

This chapter was great! The stories' progression Is getting really good, and Tabby is becoming an awesome assassin princess! The way she adds to the story with her quick wit ...

This was awesome! As someone who likes to just sorta float around the surface of the pool, I don't hav a preferred depth, but this made me love the deep ...

This chapter was awesome! I loved the intensity, and dark tone you put into these scenes. The dialogue is realistic, and this investigation had a lot of emotion and weight ...

This was a wonderful chapter! It's interesting without being too dramatic or high-stakes, which I really appreciate in literature. With a name like "The Sculptor's Knife", I was expecting much ...

This was very well written! The darkness and drama is so thick you could cut it with a knife! I really love that you were able to tell story that, ...

I'm back-back-back-back-back agee-an. (I don't think anyone will get that reference lol) This chapter was great! The mood was always apparent, and you have a great knack for pacing. Other ...

This was great! I love how you didn't use any gimmicky metaphors or make any weird jokes, it really added to the intimacy of the scene! Very few authors can ...