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Hiya Horisun! I like this poem. It's a good metaphor for feeling overwhelmed by responsibilities and, more often than not, busywork. But there are a few issues, namely the meter ...

Howdy Hi, WinnyWriter! This poem was absolutely lovely. I can feel the speakers affinity for the nighttime, and how they discovered an entirely different universe upon stepping outside their door ...

Howdy, Vil! As a large fan of RBG's work, and as someone who lives in an all-ladies household, this poem is pretty much hitting home. However, I am going to ...

Hello there! I'd like to start off by saying that I liked this poem. It was short and sweet, with a nice story. I agreed with watcha on a lot ...

Greetings and salutations, friend! I will admit that I'm going into this cold, but I might just have to go back and read the rest of it! You've got an ...

Heya there, Rosewood! This was a really great poem. In the description you mentioned how you thought this poem was rigid, and while I agree, I feel that it's rather ...

Hello Vita! This was a beautiful story, and easily the most romantic (and gay) take on the apocalypse I have ever had the pleasure of experiencing. My favorite aspect by ...

Hello, sheyren! It's not often that there's a work in the Literary Spotlight that's still in the Green Room. Or maybe it happens very often, and I'm just not paying ...

Ahoy, Articus! This was an absolutely magnificent poem! The story is clear, the imagery is phenomenal, and the aesthetic is on point. I love how simple and to the point ...

Bonjour, anneonomus! I like that this poem comes from both a personal experience, and could also be seen as a metaphor for accepting something, or coming to terms with a ...

Hey hey hey, RadDog! For a first (or second) poem, this is pretty awesome. The rhyme scheme is a little weak, particularly near the end, but other than that, and ...

Hello Lezuli! I finally got around to reading the rest of your story, and I have a few points that I hadn't seen in the other commenters reviews, so I ...

Hey there, Vilnius! This is the first chapter in your story that I've read, but I might just have to go back and read from the beginning. You've got a ...

Howdy Lezuli! First and foremost, I have to admit that I'm going into this chapter cold. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but I thing I might just ...

Hello, hello, hello! I'd say I'm here for a review, but I'm sure Emily knows that already. I'd like to start by saying that Emily is already a very likable ...