Icefire63111

My first submission in a series I'M starting! Be truthful; don`t hold back! Really people, tell me exactly what you think, cut me into pieces, I can put myself back ...

Please hold nothing back!!! I can`t get better unless I know what I`m doing wrong!! ************************************************** Anna turned up the volume in on her headphones, attempting to blo

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New version (Ver. 2) I pushed long dark hair out of my eyes, desperate to find my last class of the day, which was English. After school I was going ...

*********************************************************************************** CHAPTER 2: I began walking down the side walk, not caring where I went or when I`d be there. Jenny was so stupid, so

I finnaly,finnaly wrote a poem. It's the worst poem in the history of horrid poems. Go ahead, laugh at it. And then review it. ********* Did you feel anything? Did ...

There was scarlet around her, slowly flowing from the open wounds on the creature in her hands. A small rabbit had become her dinner; . Erupting from her throat were ...

“C’mon. why won’t you tell me?” “You’d laugh.” “Alex, you’re my best friend. Sure, I’ll laugh, but then you’ll laugh, and it’ll all turn out okay.” My best friend, Amber, ...

"Please, Please, don't touch me..." He didn't listen, but continued taking off my clothing, crashing his lips againist mine, not letting go of my hands. I kicked him. He frowned, ...

***Please, you don't have to review all three chapters. One or two is fine.... But all three would be great!!!**Chapter 1***I’m sorry, Nami. I didn’t mean to run into you.” ...