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Re: The Scream
Um.. Hi This is VERY VERY well written... I do have a tip though... most of us on here... mainly me don't understand half of these words. Or maybe it's ...
Feb 27, 2014 -
Re: The Bear
OH MY GOSH!! This is really REALLY GOOD! Great metaphors! It catches your attention and you cant stop reading XD There is a few things that was weird though, the ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Stifled
Hi, I like this poem a lot! There's only one thing I was wondering about. The line that says "none of them I can tell that it is you.' did ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Work in Progress (no official title) Prologue
KEEEEP GOING!!! I like the idea you're getting to :3 it's really great. One thing though is that 'mommy' should be 'Mommy' seeing as she's always calling her that. My ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back
Okay... THIS WAS AWESOME! I really liked how you portrayed your character. You showed him as a good person even though at this point a lot of people will doubt ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Yet I Do Not Fight
I really like your haiku. You had the right pattern and everything XD You even managed to make the poem have feeling which is hard to do with any type ...
Dec 22, 2013