IamTraunt

Hey, Writer! You posted this yesterday!?! WHAAAAAAT? SEVEN COMMENTS! *gasps* I know you're popular... But wow. So I'm gonna give you a long review. Yes, I'm going to try with ...

Hey! I'm here to talk about this wonderful chapter. When we talked about the options you had laid out in front of you, I thought Ash's point of view would ...

Hey, Cuz! I've stopped procrastinating and come here to review :) Okay, I'm going to jump right in there! Jackson noticed my observing, because he said, “Yeah, even though we ...

Hey, Therese, my dear Cuz! I am finally here :) Okay, I thought in the few paragraphs where the girl was mentioned needed some thinking through. You put in italics ...

Hey, Wise! I repeat what jazzy has just said... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! I think you should be some form of a song writer when you grow up - if ...

Ether... Oh. My. Word. I think this was one of your best chapters yet! I was so exhilarated. Every second my heart was thud thud thudding . The tension - ...

Hey, ScarlettFire! So, you used some lines from the Poem Generator, hmmm? I couldn't tell to be honest, but that's because you've used the same style to fit the lines, ...

*cries* I wanted to be first. But you're too popular, Night. Hee hee. Okay... down to business. NO. NO! DON'T HURT HIM! Oh. My. Word. Night! You are scaring me. ...

Yes! I am finally here as commanded! ^^ Two nitpicks: It was asymmetrical, one arm was longer than the other, and it curved left smoothly to the ground, so that ...

Hey, Etherealember! I'm back for more! This novel is too good to be ignored. Okay, because I feel awful about starting with the nitpicks I'm going to start with the ...

Hey! I'm here, yes, to be first review! Nitpicks! I had nothing to do , which was rare. I have just added in the words that are needed in red. ...

Night, I am here to compliment you to death review! Nitpicks! Normal people aren’t ripped from everything they know, everyone they love, and thrown into hellish situations like this. I ...

Hey, Stsngelove! Ooo! Skanking. This is so interesting! I wonder what made you write about this... Anyway! What I found out about Skanking: Skanking is a form of dancing practiced ...

Hey, LMJRayner. I'm back to review another work of yours! I think you want to make me cry. I really think you do. This was just - wow - it ...

Hey, bluecoral! Welcome to YWS! So first of all, I'm going to do some nitpicks, or say things that need correcting. Nitpicks! The staff’s’ voices ringing in my ears, making ...