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Ha! I live in America and I know the feeling, people are crazy. might review this later.

I do know of one series: the vagrant saga by Peter Newman . It%u2019s a science fiction series with awesome covers. There are three books: vagrant, seven, and malice, I%u2019ve ...

I was going to say something here. Then I deleted it all in an edit. now I'm just going to write about how I can't remember what I was going ...

Hello. Thank you for your review, this is very helpful. Especially the comma splices, I know what they are and the have been nuisance to me for while, and (not ...

thanks for reviewing (good to know the points I wasted bumping it were worth something, that and requesting a review, I'm glad there was a point to that), I have ...

You%u2019re welcome, pushing yourself out of your comfort zone is really the only way you get better and can broaden your skill set.

No problem! Something I think I%u2019m going try and find a way to recommend beta readers. I have two (Abigail and Stephanie, three counting my English teacher) and they are ...

You%u2019re welcome.

thanks.

You%u2019re welcome! I%u2019ll look up those houses when I%u2019m feeling curious.

Thanks! I'm a bit busy right now, but I'll look over your feedback in more detail later.

This didn%u2019t sound harsh, I always say that all someone gets from straight praise is an overinflated head, so thanks for pointing out these things. 1: I didn%u2019t notice the ...

The I is a Roman numeral, there are fourteen others and instead of naming them all I just decided to label them with Roman numerals.

I feel I'd lose the rhythm if I did that. I also deliberately made the first line the ending, they are all like that, I have them all published here ...

I had an alternate version where they got robbed, but when I was about to start foreshadowing that I realized it would have come out of nowhere and be pretty ...