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Hello. This is my review. That was interesting. I liked your take on the repunzle story there are some lines that I think can be fixed, like “he always took ...

Hello. This is my review. Show don’t tell. The biggest issue here is that you show far more than you tell, while many writers (including myself) tire of hearing this, ...

Hello. This is my review. Well that was hilarious. I kind of saw the ending coming but I didn’t think you’d do exactly what you did. This was an interesting ...

Hello. This is my review. My to greatest questions after reading this are “is it true?”, it seems depressing enough, and “what is it?” While I can’t answer the first ...

One good turn deserves another. So here we are. This poem is interesting, I haven’t seen a lot poems like this. There’s some great imagery and metaphor here. My biggest ...

There’s an interesting story here, I like the idea of a Greek mythology sort of story, and it’s a very bold choice simply because of the kind of works you’re ...

These are my thoughts over the entirety of this piece. It unfortunate that you lost inspiration, I say this more out sympathy and a general disappointment at seeing another story ...

You made a good decision in momentarily ditching the school setting (something we’ve all seen before), and The world you have here is progressively getting more and more interesting, which ...

The maxim of ‘show, don’t tell’ applies here. Even though this is a tragic and deeply moving story, I feel nothing because I have no attachment to the characters. The ...

An interesting sequel l, though I have to admit I’m kind of disappointed that we haven’t seen more of this fictional world. The smell thing is interesting, and if I ...

my Biggest issue with this sis that it is in present tense, it feels like you "adapted” it from a story that wasn’t in present tense to begin with, rather ...

To your description: there is word for this sort of thing, it is useually called a novella, they occupy a sort of limbo between short story and novel, and from ...