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Hello. This is my review. Well, it’s been forever. The world has changed substantially since my last review. But that doesn’t really change anything, so here we go. Here’s what ...

Hello. This is my review. Happy review day. Let’s get started. Here’s the negatives: General criticism The ending was one of my biggest issues (I don’t normally remark on story, ...

Hello. This is my review. Well here we go. Here’s what I didn’t like: This story has a lot of time skips and that makes it quite disorienting, especially since ...

Hello. This is my review. Get the balloons folks! After this review I should have my second star! So then, let’s get started. First, the bad: My biggest complaints are ...

Hello. This is my review. This was interesting, I will make a point of reading the first draft and give my two cents about it. With the pleasantries out of ...

Hello. This is my review. This was good. But telling people what they’re doing right doesn’t usually lead to improvement, so let’s start with the bad. First of these is ...

Hello. This is my review. I promised that I l’d review your work and here we are. Let’s get on with things. First, the negatives: My largest issue with this ...

Hello. It’s been a while. So why waste time. First, you said you needed help cutting words out, I am more than happy to help so let’s get straight to ...

Hello. This is my review. Is there really a minister of sports in Australia? I don’t think there is here in the just okay U. S. Of A., if there ...

Hello. This is my review. I’ve said that this is the portion I want to see more of and despite the flaws (which I will get into later) it is ...

Hello. This is my review. So here I am again, I was wondering when you’d add to this. I like how you’re using the smells to imply emotions, this is ...

Hello. This is my review. Much better ending this time! It was far more final this time and the story was far more polished as a whole. I noticed that ...

Hello. This is my review. This was quite funny, my favorite part was the demon descending into an office chair, there was just something so delightfully absurd about that to ...

Hello. This is my review. In the beginning What I found most interesting about this was the ending, it didn’t feel like a complete ending, it felt like the end ...

Hello. This is my review. My largest issue here is with how many unanswered questions there are. Unanswered questions aren’t bad in and of themselves, if they are left on ...