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Re: Wind [Story]
Izumi I really liked this story. It drew me in wanting to know what would happen next. Only a couple of critiques. “Dear Mikio, I hope you like your room. ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: The Soul Scheme [Chapter One] Edited*
Excellent chapter my friend! You described everything so vividly, I love it! All of the minor mistakes have been taken care of in the posts before mine. It draws you ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: The Hideaway
Good job Luke! This is a great prologue that really sucks you into it. Makes me want to see more of it and I oh so ever do! The only ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: A Small Wolf Story I Came up With off the top of my Head.
OK, for it being short I liked it. The wolves names were also pretty cool too. Spelling and grammar were fine by my standards. But about the prophecy thing, its ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Terror. The prologue.
OK, I liked this story. A good mystery is something I am always interested in. I saw one mistake that hasn't been mention yet I think. Prologue He had gone… ...
Jan 31, 2010