HurricaneEmily

I really liked this. (Yeah, the lamest thing to start off with.) But I did. I am absolutely the worst at critiqueing, especially poetry. But thats alright at the moment, ...

Hey, thanks for commenting. I was getting a bit paranoid like... "No one likes it, so they don't critique!" Thank goodness. Well, I've fixed the mistake and I'm glad you ...

I love it. Loooooove it. Seriously.

Not to come to my defence or anything.... At age six, she was at a grade eleven reading level and an aspiring author. TOO exaggerated. It's like comparing our current ...

Not to come to my defence or anything.... At age six, she was at a grade eleven reading level and an aspiring author. TOO exaggerated. It's like comparing our current ...

I like this one too. I love how the Grandpa isn't all... Grandpa-y. He's not going to sit in a rocking chair. He might take you to a rock concert ...

Wow. What is up with you and cute poems with good.. erm.. rythm?! Translation: I love it!

Awwww! This is really cute, and I like the uhhh What's it called? Like... rythm to it.

I'm glad everyone likes it. *sigh*

I hate to be impatient, but I'm a bit disappointed that it's been 24 hours, and I haven't gotten any critiques/comments, and only twelve views.