HostofHorus

Hey Mello! I really liked this! It was good, and I love poems that question and require real thinking on the readers part. The grammar was fine, really the only ...

Hey there Mello! So first, let me tell you that I picked your poem then immediately went and turned the song "Happiness" on by The Fray. :) Haha! Anywho... I ...

Hey there Rain! A little late to review, but I'm here. I only glanced through the other reviews, so sorry if I repeat! Grammar: I'll start here. She doesn’t go ...

Ello Chimp! So, I think this has a lot of potential. That said, there are some things you need to fix. There are also some things I think are perfect. ...

Hey there Kat! Splendid day to fulfill a request! Thank your for the chance. So, grammar. I don't got anything. It was pretty much immaculate in that part, so kudos ...

First off, good job, I'm the human host of Horus and I'm excited to critique! It was cute! That many of us , (No comma needed) forgot long ago? On ...

Hey Snook! Ok, let me start by saying, I love this. Like really, I do. I feel like a lot of guys are just flat out rude to girls, and ...

Ello there Knightly! Thank you for the review request! I have nothing for grammar except to suggest taking a look at the structure. It isn't terrible, there are just some ...

Hey Jas! Sorry I'm so late! It has been really hectic for me lately.... My dad has his busy season, and I'm doing a bunch of testing, so it has ...

Hey, sorry I'm so late! I haven't been on much lately because of a bunch of end of year tests and all that at school.... But hey, maybe this will ...

Hey Shadow! Thanks for the review request, sorry it took so long. I've been dealing with a bunch of crummy tests lately. :/ But here I am! Grammer: Yearning now ...

Hey there, here to review as requested! Grammer: No real grammatical errors. I don't like the 'Cos at the end though, 'Cuz 'Cause, something other than that, it just looks ...

Hey Silent! So I apologize again for out little dilemma haha :) it really bugs me! (grrr....) Anyways, always happy to review! Grammer: and when the view come s back ...

Howdy howdy mortal! Thanks for the request, this was a good one! :) I review using: -Make corrections in red -Give suggestions/Questions in purple -Explain the things I like in ...

Hey there! So I'll stay away from my regular reviewing ways as you asked for characters, structure, and style. So here you are: Characters: This to me was the brightest ...