Horisun

I will!

Oh goodness... This was awesome, so, so, awesome. I can not wait for act two!

Thank you! It was really by my brother! :D

oh and I forgot pay atteintoin if I ever make my own account please if you really want to see more

Thank you but I might not write everyday because this is my sisters computer but im glad you liked it!

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Oh, oops. Gabe was the name of THE BROTHER, before I changed it, must have missed that. :D Thanks for pointing out.

I liked this a lot! I really enjoyed it, and can't wait to see more of these characters. There wasn't much I didn't like, and the things I think could ...

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Oh, and sure, I'll tag you, if you want.

Thanks or the review! Yeah, this isn't my best work, I'm not great when it comes to these kinds of stories! Nice review! Btw! :D

I see what you mean. I honestly do terrible when writing pieces like this! Thanks for the review, I will keep everything you said in mind!

Thanks!

Quote, "Who wills, can. Who tries, does. Who loves, will." -Anne McCaffrey I think you can make whatever you want, happen. Everything on your list is possible. You CAN make ...

This is awesome! Please don't change anything about the poem itself! It's amazing.