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Thank you so much for the review! Reading it made me smile, I'm so glad you liked the atmosphere, and I appreciate your feedback on stronger descriptions! I'll definitely look ...

I see your dilemma. Here are a few tweaks that I would suggest- 1. Rather than an exception to girls, make her an exception to nobles in general. I think ...

Thank you for the review! I liked reading your different interpretations of this piece. You hit the nail on the head with your interpretation in the first and third stanza! ...

You know, you’re last entry was great… but this one was lit!

This was wick -ed good!

Thank you for the review! :D

Your poems never fail to amaze me

I think my favorite scene so far was Steve and Anne comforting Corey after he confides in them about his brother. I also really enjoyed the fight sequence in chapter ...

Of course! :D

I%u2019m really happy to have been helpful! I really love Nellie%u2019s power set, but I%u2019m also quite partial to Sandra! Corey is also a really fantastic protagonist, and I like ...

No problem! I%u2019m happy to help! Exposition placement can be real fiddly, but I think you%u2019re already on the right track.

Thank you so much! I definitely agree about dispersing exposition rather than placing it there all at once, it%u2019s certainly something I%u2019ll consider

Don’t have time to review this at present, just wanted to say I love the personification in this piece, especially when the narrator notes Autumns “silent footsteps” behind her, and ...

Of course! Thank you for the reply :D

No problem!