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Thank you for the review, and no worries at all! I really appreciate you taking the time to give this a read : )

Thank you so much for the review!! I agree with pretty much everything you said here. To answer your question, yes, it's hyperbole; like, she's forcing herself to calm down, ...

Thank you so much for the review! I didn't even make the connection to Legal Eagle, the Youtuber, but I do really enjoy some of his videos, lol

Hi, of course! What exactly do you mean when you say that the story takes the eccentricities dead serious? Would it be more ridiculous if the tone was solemn and ...

So sorry, I just read the stories description and realized that you said it totally isn't a parody of Snow White. Please forgive my mistake. xoxo

Thank you for the review! Definitely agree there are some pacing issues. Had to chop about a thousand words, as this was for my creative writing class and the limit ...

Thank you for the review! I'm really glad my imagery came through so strong here. Being a local among tourists is a really bizarre and isolating experience because you're operating ...

En contraire, there is nothing more flattering than to be compared to cheese! That said, I'm very... grate-ful, for your review :D

Thank you for the review! Wholeheartedly agree with your take on the fourth paragraph. Last stanza I wrote and definitely the laziest. As much as I enjoy writing poetry on ...

Thank you for the review! You really picked up on everything I wanted the reader to pick up on. %u201CThe girl in bed%u201D being a literal person, while also representing ...

It is clear that Solea was suspected of being a Conquerer! I don%u2019t feel that needs any more clarification. As for the last bit, yes, I found it odd that ...

As soon as I post the review, I realize I left a paragraph hanging. But I think it's funny so I'm leaving it in. To finish my thought, though, "Logically, ...

No problem! The swans strongly reminded me of the fairies in the original Sleeping Beauty. There were twelve in total, who came to give gifts to a "special" child. Not ...

Thank you for the review!!

Really good point about laying the groundwork for this world! I've got so much information about motivations and rules in my brain that I sometimes forget what I have and ...