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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.2

    Hello, its me again! You know the drill, so I'll just get right into it. This story has been a lotta fun so far, but now we have epic space ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1

    Hello, its me again, spamming your Notifications! This chapter introduces us to two new characters, who I am already in love with! Their dynamics are just so much fun. Like, ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Prologue Part 2

    Hello, hello! Its me again! I really liked this prologue! The scenery was gorgeous, and the dialogue between the two characters felt incredibly natural! I loved every moment of it! ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead Prologue

    Hello, and good day to you! I really like how this story starts off! It sets a clear objective, yet leaves a lot of questions that keep us hooked! I ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Script » Theatre, General Re: Midnight Work

    Hello there! And a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! This story tells a very interesting tale. I feel as if there really is some moral gray area here. ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Hello there! I hope you are having a good night! (Or day, depending on when you read this) This was a very interesting opening prologue. I don't know if you ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Art » Fantasy, Humor Re: BOND

    Hello there! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night, wherever you are! This was an incredibly fast paced prologue! The action was quite interesting, and very exciting! ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: if the sun's too bright

    Hello there! I hope you’re having a good day or night, depending on when you’re reading this! This poem is absolutely gorgeous. The opening stanza is just beautiful. One of ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Left on read

    Hello there! As you can most likely guess, I’m here to review this poem! This poems pattern was incredible. I loved how the texts slowly came more and more often. ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 3

    So, jumping right into it, this chapter explores the aftermath of everything. You succeeded in making me want to punch those other girls in the face. You also did really ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Tree Girl Chapter 2

    Hello again! I’m here to continue to review your story! This chapter was a great transition to the rest of your story! I love the description of the scenery. It ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Tree Girl

    Hey! I hope you are having a good day or night! This chapter was very shocking, especially for the first one. The last paragraph hits quite hard. I lost my ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Aerouant Assailant - Chapter Two

    Right off the bat, this was a really good in between chapter! I’ve already seen some really good improvement between his one and the last! This sounds a tad weird, ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Aerouant Assailant - Chapter One

    Hello there! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Jumping right into things, Tro is already a fascinating character. I look forward to seeing you delve deeper ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Aerouant Assailant - Prolouge

    Hello there! I hope you are having a good day or night! As you can guess, I'm here to do a review! Right off the bat, this story caught my ...

    Dec 6, 2020


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