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Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.2
Hello, its me again! You know the drill, so I'll just get right into it. This story has been a lotta fun so far, but now we have epic space ...
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Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1
Hello, its me again, spamming your Notifications! This chapter introduces us to two new characters, who I am already in love with! Their dynamics are just so much fun. Like, ...
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Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Prologue Part 2
Hello, hello! Its me again! I really liked this prologue! The scenery was gorgeous, and the dialogue between the two characters felt incredibly natural! I loved every moment of it! ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead Prologue
Hello, and good day to you! I really like how this story starts off! It sets a clear objective, yet leaves a lot of questions that keep us hooked! I ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Midnight Work
Hello there! And a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! This story tells a very interesting tale. I feel as if there really is some moral gray area here. ...
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Re: Prologue
Hello there! I hope you are having a good night! (Or day, depending on when you read this) This was a very interesting opening prologue. I don't know if you ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: BOND
Hello there! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night, wherever you are! This was an incredibly fast paced prologue! The action was quite interesting, and very exciting! ...
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Re: if the sun's too bright
Hello there! I hope you’re having a good day or night, depending on when you’re reading this! This poem is absolutely gorgeous. The opening stanza is just beautiful. One of ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Left on read
Hello there! As you can most likely guess, I’m here to review this poem! This poems pattern was incredible. I loved how the texts slowly came more and more often. ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl: Chapter 3
So, jumping right into it, this chapter explores the aftermath of everything. You succeeded in making me want to punch those other girls in the face. You also did really ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl Chapter 2
Hello again! I’m here to continue to review your story! This chapter was a great transition to the rest of your story! I love the description of the scenery. It ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Tree Girl
Hey! I hope you are having a good day or night! This chapter was very shocking, especially for the first one. The last paragraph hits quite hard. I lost my ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Aerouant Assailant - Chapter Two
Right off the bat, this was a really good in between chapter! I’ve already seen some really good improvement between his one and the last! This sounds a tad weird, ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Aerouant Assailant - Chapter One
Hello there! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Jumping right into things, Tro is already a fascinating character. I look forward to seeing you delve deeper ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Aerouant Assailant - Prolouge
Hello there! I hope you are having a good day or night! As you can guess, I'm here to do a review! Right off the bat, this story caught my ...
Dec 6, 2020
