Hopeful_Youth

Ohh yes....i wrote it so quickly, i didn't really think of putting whisper. that would be a much better word. im glad i had fewer editing mistakes this time. :] ...

oh, well yeah I'm going to add a lot more detail to it once i start writing it. I'll definitely put flaws in each character, including the main character, and ...

p.s- Chirantha- it's too small because it's the prelude to the story :) and i realize that her thoughts are in quotations....but it was like she was sleep talking, you ...

Yeah that is true.....i can make it cheesy, or amazing, depending on , well, everything. Every author has his or her own voice, so i just have to use mine ...

Chirantha: lol it's not like she's lusting over him....ok, well, maybe, yes. haha. but, she can't help it. he's in her dreams. if you had reoccuring dreams about your perfect ...

Yes, that helps alot, thankyou. :] I guess i didn't make the transition very clear...but the point of why i went from worrying about the ghost of the past to ...

p.s, i hope you continue to write this story, it seems like it could really go somewhere. good luck! -[Megan]- please add me, also. ;]

oh, yeah i know what happened with the font thing made it confusing. lol. i was trying to actually make it that font....but i guess it doesn't work on the ...

I like this line a lot! : the fear would lose its file in the employment agency of emotions. it's very interesting and original. Not trite at all, as you ...

An interesting beginning to the story. But, where is the train taking you?