HopeRobinson

"Remember me. When you die I want to be the last face that you think about so that we could meet in the afterlife and…….. stop crying." That hit me ...

Thank you, but this is not the end for Hide :)

I like it! Continue onward and make better things in the future.....One thing bothers me though......If the character figured out he is in a story, will he figure out that ...

Well I can't really give a solid good review that would be meaningful and help you improve as a writer, but what I can do is tell you that you ...

It's fine haha, to bad I can't post another story yet. I have to review first and I am bad at that DX

Thank you very much, I will take your info into consideration and better my skills :D

Also, don't worry about Hide haha. I plan to continue it for practice.

Thank for your feed back, I shall go through it and work anything I need to :)