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Yup, no worries! c:

Oh no, I'm well aware that it's the first chapter! What I was trying to say was that you need to explain in the chapter why they're fighting. Otherwise we're ...

XD Alright, I'll give it a go! I was going to say you can tag me but it might be pointless for a little bit. Mind you if you tag ...

Aha! That makes more sense. And I completely understand about the syntax- I have trouble with that as well. Hm, I might as well. It'll probably take me forever to ...

Thanks! c:

Thanks! c:

Thanks Fortis! ^_^ Yeah I hate how the second stanza is all weird. I think I will change that. I just put the places in because I love how they ...

Thank you for your comment, Vex! Glad you enjoyed it. Just a friendly reminder: it's not very nice to put random letters in your reviews to increase your character count! ...

Don't worry, I realize it's a first draft! I post first drafts on here all the time and mine are DREADFUL- but that's why I post them, so I have ...

That's odd; my grandmother took our home away too. O.O

Thanks for the review! I used the "ands" intentionally, but I'll consider replacing them with commas.

I mean... gah it's been too long since I've played Pokemon. *flees*

YESH good water

Thank you Hatt ^_^

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it c: