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Re: The Secrets of the Bloodless: Chapter 1
Hey! Here to review your work! At first I thought "Oh, it's just like all the other vampire things" but you tricked me! And I love it... Great cliff hanger, ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Think Like A Dude Entry #2
Yes... I'm here. I liked this, her way of venting is great! But there are a few things I'd like to mention, nothing too harsh. I'll start with the way ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Cat's Eye (Ch.1 Sc. 2)
Hi there! I'd like to give your work a review, if you don't mind... Ok then, let's get started. Cool idea, I didn't realise it was a YWS thing until ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Adventure
Hi Blackwood! Review time!!! I thought that this was great, quite well put together. I also thought you did an awesome job combining the poem and the story. But, around ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: Flightless ~~~ Chapter 1
Hello! Holysocks here for a review! I don't know why, but I love how he knew her name. I just can't get over it! Now for the review. The girl ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: The Empire Chapter 3: Nothing Stays a Secret Pt. 1
Hello there! Socks here to try my hand at a review. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so this might be a little hard, but here we go! ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Somewhere 2
Hello Twit!... I mean your name! Anyway, I'm going to try my hand at reviewing this work of yours. I haven't read the first chapter, so this should be interesting, ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: To The One I Love(d) | Edited
Hi again, it's Holysocks! It was a bit depressing, but I like it. I don't see too many rhyming poems these days, so it was a real treat. In the ...
Jun 27, 2013 -
Re: Seven For A Secret - Part 2
Hey there! Socks here, to do my best at a review. This was very interesting to me, and I have to admit that I liked It... quite a lot. Mostly ...
Jun 25, 2013 - Re: May 12, 2013
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Re: Dream
Hey! I like this, it's quite good ( the ending is the best! ) but there's some things that I would like to mention. First of all, where's the comas, ...
Apr 19, 2013 -
Re: Cyclical
Hi! Just a quick review. I did like this, it really made me think and I love songs that do that. The tenth verse sounds a little odd to me, ...
Apr 18, 2013
