Holysocks

I love this! It's incredibly dark, but you don't know that at first. I was thinking that someone had died, because the colours seemed like a symbol for a grieving ...

:-P I like this chapter a lot! It's terrible, but good. And Zeke is evil after all! I wish he wasn't, but you know. So one thing I didn't really ...

Heya! I like the invisible wall thing! Did I say that last time? I don't remember. I actually thought it was glass... but it makes more sense for it to ...

:( Hi. That was quite depressing, though very good. It's the case for a lot of teenagers. Feeling useless. I have the same problem from time to time; I'll think ...

Wow! I love this poem. And that's saying a lot because I don't normally like poetry! XP You have a beautiful vocabulary, let me say. In fact, most of the ...

Zeke's a sneaky one... but I think I know what he's up to. ;) Pretty much all I have is praise for this chapter! I loved everything that happened, it ...

Hello Noelle! I'm here at last!!! XP This was a very interesting chapter. Torture eh? Fun. This new character, who's introduced as a villain, is doing a pretty good job! ...

Hello. :-D Aw, I liked Zeke. Now I'm a bit concerned. But it certainly is an interesting plot twist! :-P This chapter had a very high level of drama. And ...

Hello! :-P Honestly, I have been procrastinating. When I read this chapter the first time, I didn't think I could find anything to critique. But I've got a few things ...

Hey! I'm here, as promised. This was very enjoyable, I'm not sure why you think you're such a terrible writer. Aley is so cute in her younger years – so ...

Hi, I'm here!!! :-D I really, REALLY, like this chapter. There's a lot of emotion, and information, especially in Akia's flash back. I found myself feeling sad for her and ...

I'm finally here! Sorry I took so long. This was really nice, we got a bit of an insight into Sam and Akia's friendship. We even found out that Sam ...

It's Superman. O.O Why, I don't know... because he's the lamest, sorry. Forget that, I'm here to review! :-P She seemed to think that Spiderman boxer shorts were an acceptable ...

Hello my precious! ( Watched The Desolation of Smaug the other night... so that's all going through my mind, again, sorry. ) So let's get down to things, shall we? ...

I'm back! :-D I enjoyed this second part quite a lot. This was my favorite sentence: "Think of where we're going and I'll pick up the waves." I like that! ...