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Re: Names then Numbers
Hey Burrow! Wow, it's been awhile! O_O Welcome back!!! This is a cool idea! I love the politics of this world; very intriguing. It certainly makes me wonder what you're ...
Dec 9, 2016 -
Re: You only love me when I'm leavin'
Hey Cas! I thought I'd drop by for a review! c: I secretly love raps; they're so facinating how they're constructed, and the rhythem is so interesting- like to me ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Of Singers and Smoking
Hello again! c: I quite enjoyed this, actually. It's kind of a relaxing piece and I just liked the voice of the character. It was interesting to wonder why a ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: a wandering mother
Hello! Care for a review? c: I really like the feel you got going on in this piece. When I first started reading I thought this was going to be ...
Nov 29, 2016 -
Re: Why Zebras Have Stripes
Hello there! I absolutely love this! I want to see this as a children's book with colourful pictures and everything- and I can totally see it! The opening for an ...
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Capshaw Bay
Hey there! You've got a lovely story here! I'm always jealous of people that can write long stories; mine are always so tiny! I also think you did a pretty ...
Nov 24, 2016 -
Re: The Basement Secrets : Chapter 1
Hey there! Care for a review this lovely day? I have to say that ending was a good hook! I didn't expect that at all, and now I certainly want ...
Nov 8, 2016 -
Re: nmbtbth (a poem about personality types and hormones)
I can't believe this is still in the Green Room. I rather enjoyed this poem all those weeks ago, so when I happened upon it this evening I thought "why ...
Nov 6, 2016 -
Re: Trying to comprehend
Hey Starcrosser! Welcome to the site! This is a lovely short piece. I like the sort of mystery about the male character described in this story, you did a great ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: The Poker Game: An Introduction to the Cast of Characters.
Hello! C: I thought I'd drop by for a review! I really like the atmosphere of this work, it's very rusty and run-down and for some reason I always find ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: Notes On the Wind
Hey Megrim! Up for a review today? I loved this! This piece of flash fiction was eerie and intriguing and this is how I feel prologues should be; short, sweet, ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: I chose life
Hey! c: Care for a review? I agree with most of what's being said in this work! Grief is not fun- but it is a necessary feeling so that we ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: My Concrete Porch
Hello there! C: I came in here thinking this was going to be a light-hearted romance, but wow was I ever wrong! XD I liked how tragic you made this ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: Protector
Hey there! ^_^ Care for a review? I think this is a pretty strong start for a novel! There's mystery, conflict, intrigue, more mystery, and a character whom I want ...
Sep 21, 2016 -
Re: jest kidding.
Hey there! I love reviewing lyrics, and I'm not sure why. You've got an interested narrator in this. He/she/they obviously don't think too highly of themselves... or at least that's ...
Sep 20, 2016
