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This made me laugh so hard XD It was kind of hard to read, though, with all the crossed out stuff, but I read it anyway and it was really ...

I really like it! It's beautiful, and it has great attitude. I like how it talks about how you're not always going to be happy, but at the same time, ...

AAH! TWINNY, I LOVE IT

This section was removed for spam. Do not quote the entire literary work when writing a review. -- Nate Dang, man. That was intense. And I LOVED IT! :) I ...

Hey, Anger :) All in all, good job. It's an interesting plot, and I like your character. 1. Waking up isn't a chore, staying awake is. When I open my ...

Beautiful, just beautiful. I loved it. It was very inspiring, very wonderful. I can relate. I didn't find any nitpicks. If you ever catch the stardust, keep it in the ...

Wow! That was awesome! It was a good read, easy to understand, and the single nitpick I had was that it said, I struggled out of my mothers grasp instead ...

So I'm sorry if it's terrible to read. Ohmygoshno! No way was this wonderful prose terrible to read! In fact, I do believe this is the best thing I've read ...

CA-PI-TA-LI-ZA-TION!! Grar! I noted that the capitalization in this piece was rather patchy. Patchy grammar actually deters me and a lot of other readers, which is why it's so important. ...

Hi, I'm Hollow and I shall be your reviewer today! (: This piece certainly could be edited. Some examples: It starts with: Epilogue And epilogues belong at the end, not ...

I... am a nitpicker. Just thought I should let you know before we begin. I only found a few mistakes, all grammatical. They were very minor, yet they bothered me, ...

Wow, this was great! It really got my attention. I liked the descriptions, how the background information wasn't just thrown at me, and how you DIDN'T start with Hi, I'm ...

Wow... That really caught my attention. It's a great piece- no spelling or grammar errors that I could see, however, there was one thing that did bother me. Unfortunately for ...

in a bright sunny casual day there was Bob a tall popular likeable young man which realy had a knack with the ladies. his charming appearance would leave them to ...

Wow! I love how relatable this is. It's something almost every teenager goes through, with just enough exaggeration to be hilarious but not corny or overly-laughable. Your character seems very ...