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Thank you, but I will tell you, that the way this book is formatted is a bit different then what you are thinking. One, the book deals with all three ...

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Lol story was funny and made me laugh. I loved the sibling fuss there made the story feel more real. You did have one or two mistakes. Like you said ...

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Lol story was funny and made me laugh. I loved the sibling fuss there made the story feel more real. You did have one or two mistakes. Like you said ...

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lol story was funny and made me laugh. I loved the sibling fuss there made the story feel more real. You did have one or two mistakes. Like you said ...

I appreciate the review.

Thank you for the advice.

Hey rubric good story. I really liked it. I will say at time I was lost and your story was hard to read but that just comes from word associations ...

Thank you for the review its really helpful

I appreciate the review and will take in what you said.

Thanks, steggy for the review, and I will do my best to fix this to the best of my knowledge and the tips you given me. As far your questions ...

Lol, You use the name Jas a lot....never notice it

Okay interesting concept in chapter two. Your charters are coming more to life and I am loving every bit of it. The only thing I can say wrong is what ...

Wait its over???? Ah man you cant just leave the fight hanging like that I got to know what happens at the end, so please finish the story....but this is ...

Cute poem, and it speaks the truth. You are somebody no matter what you decide to do, and I believe whole heartily if you believe in yourself than who ever ...

Okay, Love the twist. So Kyoma is really a woman Named Chelsea. Never so that one coming and this chapter has me intrigued a lot. I hope chapter 8 is ...